学生作文错误小结(一)

今天一天改了一些学生的作文,丛冢发现了一些大家都犯的共性的错误,这里把它罗列出来,希望对大家以后写作有所帮助.

1 词性的错误使用，一般来说是名词和动词,形容词和名词词性区分不是很明确

 We can analysis that high income group eats mire fast foods than the other two groups.

Children have a special curious.

2 句子中缺少动词，一般来说造成的原因有很多，

（1）句子过于复杂，主从句距离比较远，

We can see hamburgers’ consumption has a steadily increase over the period from 1970 to 1990, which from less than 100 grams to more than 500 grams.

Pizza’s consumption rising regularly from 40 grams to about 250 grams from 1970 to 1990.

3 Run-on sentences 在学生的作文中出现比较频繁

主要集中在there be 句型中

There are about two thirds of criminals have saw the violence in films and on television.

4 可数名词单复数的问题 （可数名词是不可以担负放置在句中）

we should find specific way to solve these problem and we have enough reasons to predict ….

5 academic writing中缩写问题（academic writing 中是不可以出现缩写形式的）

But we can’t ignore that the severity of violence on screen affections.

6 实际句子之间很少用连接词而直接把连个或者更多句子用逗号连接起来

People who have high income like hamburgers best with over 40%, others are similar.

7 句意表达不明确

The society increases crazy at present.

8         the的使用情况

government need take vigorous actions to tackle this problem.

在一些词语前面必须要加the，譬如government, environment, ecosystem etc.同时在一些情况下没有必要使用the 的时候也不需要乱用。