学生作文错误小结(二)

8         句子不完整，缺少成分 incomplete sentences

Some question whether it is rational to pay different amount of salaries among different sorts of people .(这个句子很明显只存在主语)

9         缩写形式的使用，在学术类写作中是不可以出现abbreviation的

I’m of the opinion that it isn’t reasonable to treat every citizen by their education level.

10     使用从句时，注意句中主谓是否一致

The workers are divided into two categories which is physical members and mental workers,

11     被动与台的使用错误/ 动词的连续使用

I reckon that two kinds of staff are of the same importance who are suppose to get nearly the same amount of salary.

13 文章中句式过于单一，尤其表现在图表作文中。

14 在首段表达不同的观点时，不需要使用过去时态，一般现在时就可以

Some people insisted that women shouldn’t join the army., while others argued that they should join the army just like men.